http://www.steamypunk.net/house-of-glass-pearl/ Being the Fanciful Erotica of a SteamPunk World Fri, 21 Nov 2008 08:11:04 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6 http://www.steamypunk.net/house-of-glass-pearl/#comment-431 Wendy Jobes Sat, 17 May 2008 01:43:35 +0000 http://www.steamypunk.net/?p=16#comment-431 I really enjoyed this story! It was full of wonderful twists and a profoundly beautiful statement about Love. Well done! I will note, however, one tiny pronoun slip. "Sylvia places a hand along the small of Billy’s back, guiding him out of the foyer." I was completely thrown by Billy being a lady and found it to be a wonderful twist. However, I thought you may wish to edit the small pronoun slip. Or not! Just thought I'd bring it to your attention. Thank you for the story! Warmest Regards, Wendy I really enjoyed this story! It was full of wonderful twists and a profoundly beautiful statement about Love. Well done! I will note, however, one tiny pronoun slip. “Sylvia places a hand along the small of Billy’s back, guiding him out of the foyer.” I was completely thrown by Billy being a lady and found it to be a wonderful twist. However, I thought you may wish to edit the small pronoun slip. Or not! Just thought I’d bring it to your attention. Thank you for the story! Warmest Regards, Wendy

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