Comments for SteamyPunk http://www.steamypunk.net Being the Fanciful Erotica of a SteamPunk World Fri, 25 Jul 2008 13:57:37 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6 Comment on House Of Glass & Pearl by Wendy Jobes http://www.steamypunk.net/house-of-glass-pearl/#comment-431 Wendy Jobes Sat, 17 May 2008 01:43:35 +0000 http://www.steamypunk.net/?p=16#comment-431 I really enjoyed this story! It was full of wonderful twists and a profoundly beautiful statement about Love. Well done! I will note, however, one tiny pronoun slip. "Sylvia places a hand along the small of Billy’s back, guiding him out of the foyer." I was completely thrown by Billy being a lady and found it to be a wonderful twist. However, I thought you may wish to edit the small pronoun slip. Or not! Just thought I'd bring it to your attention. Thank you for the story! Warmest Regards, Wendy I really enjoyed this story! It was full of wonderful twists and a profoundly beautiful statement about Love. Well done! I will note, however, one tiny pronoun slip. “Sylvia places a hand along the small of Billy’s back, guiding him out of the foyer.” I was completely thrown by Billy being a lady and found it to be a wonderful twist. However, I thought you may wish to edit the small pronoun slip. Or not! Just thought I’d bring it to your attention. Thank you for the story! Warmest Regards, Wendy

]]> Comment on Chaos Theory by LC http://www.steamypunk.net/chaos-theory/#comment-149 LC Thu, 24 Apr 2008 21:39:13 +0000 http://www.steamypunk.net/chaos-theory/#comment-149 This is my kind of hot! This is my kind of hot!

]]> Comment on Homecoming, Part One by LC http://www.steamypunk.net/homecoming-part-one/#comment-148 LC Thu, 24 Apr 2008 21:20:04 +0000 http://www.steamypunk.net/homecoming-part-one/#comment-148 More please! More please!

]]> Comment on Homecoming, Part One by JY http://www.steamypunk.net/homecoming-part-one/#comment-108 JY Sat, 12 Apr 2008 21:27:39 +0000 http://www.steamypunk.net/homecoming-part-one/#comment-108 Wow, that was awesome! You expressed the urgency and the need perfectly. Very erotic and I love that you didn't use any euphemisms either. I also love how you weaved details about their lives and personalities throughout the story without interrupting the flow of it. I can't wait for the next installment! Wow, that was awesome! You expressed the urgency and the need perfectly. Very erotic and I love that you didn’t use any euphemisms either. I also love how you weaved details about their lives and personalities throughout the story without interrupting the flow of it. I can’t wait for the next installment!

]]> Comment on A Pirate of Both Day & Night by JY http://www.steamypunk.net/a-pirate-of-both-day-night/#comment-107 JY Sat, 12 Apr 2008 21:07:15 +0000 http://www.steamypunk.net/a-pirate-of-both-day-night/#comment-107 Great story! I like the descriptions and details. Great story! I like the descriptions and details.

]]> Comment on Emerson and Adalia by JY http://www.steamypunk.net/emerson-and-adalia/#comment-106 JY Sat, 12 Apr 2008 20:08:46 +0000 http://www.steamypunk.net/emerson-and-adalia/#comment-106 Another fantastic story, although I read your later one first. You write erotica very well, better than most of the published stuff I've seen so far. Plus, you set it within a great storyline, which I love. I look forward to reading more of your stories! Another fantastic story, although I read your later one first. You write erotica very well, better than most of the published stuff I’ve seen so far. Plus, you set it within a great storyline, which I love. I look forward to reading more of your stories!

]]> Comment on Chaos Theory by JY http://www.steamypunk.net/chaos-theory/#comment-94 JY Thu, 10 Apr 2008 04:13:43 +0000 http://www.steamypunk.net/chaos-theory/#comment-94 I loved this! Very well written and erotic, and not a single euphemism or piece of purple prose in this. I enjoyed your writing style as well - good detail, but not too wordy or laborious. I hope you write more. Do have any novels out as well? I loved this! Very well written and erotic, and not a single euphemism or piece of purple prose in this. I enjoyed your writing style as well - good detail, but not too wordy or laborious.

I hope you write more. Do have any novels out as well?

]]> Comment on Homecoming, Part One by Kles http://www.steamypunk.net/homecoming-part-one/#comment-15 Kles Thu, 28 Feb 2008 06:25:07 +0000 http://www.steamypunk.net/homecoming-part-one/#comment-15 Amazing story! I can't wait for part two. Amazing story! I can’t wait for part two.

]]> Comment on A Pirate of Both Day & Night by nm http://www.steamypunk.net/a-pirate-of-both-day-night/#comment-12 nm Thu, 07 Feb 2008 14:05:21 +0000 http://www.steamypunk.net/a-pirate-of-both-day-night/#comment-12 Excellent story, well done. Excellent story, well done.

]]> Comment on A Pirate of Both Day & Night by CD http://www.steamypunk.net/a-pirate-of-both-day-night/#comment-10 CD Sat, 19 Jan 2008 16:15:30 +0000 http://www.steamypunk.net/a-pirate-of-both-day-night/#comment-10 Excellent beginning. Can't wait to hear what the other two levers are for... Excellent beginning. Can’t wait to hear what the other two levers are for…

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